Not bad!  Several good smiles in there.  A few places where the editing could've been a little tighter, but on the whole it moved quickly and parodied TV detective conventions well.  I think the organ tone on the theme should be a little more aggressive though.

On the whole, I liked it a bunch.

I feel bad not liking this because I could tell a lot of effort went into it.  But the writing and concept were pretty bad.  Sometimes you guys really make me laugh hard, and then other times like this, I think, "Damn, where did it all go?"  As an overall video, it was good.  Production, lighting, acting, fliming.  But at this point, we know that you guys have the ability to pull that off every time.  I'd just like to see more consistent comedy to make use of those great production skills.  Unfortunately in this one, I didn't find anything funny about it at all.

My favorite part was when he pushed his sleeves off to break a finger.  I'm not sure why, but I liked it the most.

It was a fine video, I didn't think the organ in the intro really pushed the theme of Conrad Stryker.  As kicsiviz said, it sounds like it needs more "attack".

Episode 2: Stryker Fights a Gang

After a child is traumatized, Conrad Stryker takes on a gang of nogoodniks who all share a deadly secret.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h-Ia_iJ_8JE

I watched the bird one, and you've got a really good thing here. The concept is superb.

If you want criticism, the acting was a bit obvious. Everything seemed a bit stiff and unconvincing, it didn't really flow. Maybe throw in some more jokes, it was a bit dry at times.