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[SpatulaErotica]

this is the first real attempt i have made at making a movie besides a few really crappy half assed things. I am in editing for the second part and getting people together for a third so I dont fail here internets. Please leave some constctive critisism i would really like to hear what people I dont know think of it. On here it is called Rise of the dead but the title has been changed to A Quick Death


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jouC5NfbEh8

[TimRonan]

The only funny thing about this video is the make up job on the kid at the start. 

How do you CGI out a chin?

[jerewhit]

This video is great...

...or is it?

I haven't laughed this hard in while, though I don't suspect that's that is what you were shooting for.  First, let me say it's pretty obvious you've got a passion for making film, and I can tell you care about your product, but your technique needs improvement in several areas.  The editing is splotchy in the opening chase, the acting is pretty awful all the way through, the little  dialogue in it is just plain terrible, and a lot of the running around could have been cut.  I see what you were going for, and it was a good attempt.  But while it starts out promising, it becomes very silly by the end.  However, it did succeed in holding my attention, and I can say on a certain level I was quite entertained.  So, overall I'm going say good effort, keep on trying.

[Kalli]

Was there a particular reason the character was named Mister Hopkins?  Unless this takes place in a British school, the protagonist looked more like a student to me.  Also, wouldn't he have had keys, if he were a teacher?  The end was good (that's a good creepy look in his eye) but that's about all I can commend about the acting.

[SpatulaErotica]

LOLZ actually he is called Mr Hopkins because Matthew Hopins is a fake name i usualy use with cops. Matthew Hopkins was a 16 or 17th century witch hunter know as "the witch hunter general' and Mr Morello was named after Tom Morello the guitarist from Rage Against The Machine. We just kinda made this up as we went along so we didnt think about little things like keys for the teacher. I can defently say im not proud of my acting here it was pretty bad (I was the main guy getting chased) but atleast I can say I wasnt the worst. I really like my face in the end though aswell

[NZSkep]

You are what looks like a 13 year old white media studies student,  do you really interact with cops so often that you have a pseudonym you 'usually' use to avoid getting arrested?

[SpatulaErotica]

well first off i was like 16 - 17 when i made this and I live in surrey so being able to jump fences and bullshit cops is a nessisity

[ROBOGEN]

How do you CGI out a chin?

after effects or an incredibly skilled mspaint user.

[SpatulaErotica]

actually I am pretty good at ms paint. these are two things i have made on it

[Rex Taffel]

Um...

[Commander Keen]

A scrawny white kid running around in a blind panic? Wow, that was exciting and riveting and completely necessary to have as the entire movie. Really, there wasn't much else, though I commend the various music used in it.

Also, "talkin' about a cree-ay-ture, eh?"