A bit of (possible) errata of a more boring nature here. On page ten, after David finds the hand in the basement you have this line:

“I took two steps backward, covered my hand with my mouth and tried to calm myself. ”

Did you mean to say that David shoved his entire hand into his mouth, there? It…it doesn’t seem entirely appropriate to the situation.

That’s where I’m up to in the story, anyhow, and it’s kicking so much fucking arse so far. Gloriously insane, and after a few pages it puts me in a frame of mind in which it’s frightfully, excitingly easy to feel as though the back of my head has somehow been opened with a hinge and has started flapping loose while bits of the world come in and out as they please.

Thanks very much for writing it, and leaving it where it can be found.